From a5947be399f343b538c6e145aa2371a2098e5b36 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Daniel Moerner Date: Sun, 22 Feb 2009 15:03:28 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] Poem-3 edits, third round --- poem-3 | 22 ++++++++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 14 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/poem-3 b/poem-3 index db172c5..fcbadbd 100644 --- a/poem-3 +++ b/poem-3 @@ -1,21 +1,27 @@ -I say the cannonballs fall, -Squashed into the ground, +Intensions + +I say the cannonballs tumble down, +Squashed the ground, Squashing the ground. Which is it? -The scientist knows, but he knows only what the particles say. +The scientist knows, +but he thinks he knows only what the particles are, +which may be what the particles know, if they know themselves. What says the cannonball itself? I say that nothing is now, +Watch for it!--nothing is coming as we speak! but this is nonsense. -The sense appeals to me, +The sense of the paradox appeals to me, as a poem might, but the reference! -that is not shadowed but it is rather -lost. +--How can we refer to nothing? +that is not shadowed but is rather lost. -I say that it is the case. +I say that "it" is the case. What is the case? +Well, it's up to us! A lawyer might know, as might a philosopher. -Does it just exist, or is it more? +Does "it" just exist, or is it more? Is it is'ing now, or is it is'ing because it is always? -- 2.11.4.GIT